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Post by Damion Kasai on Mar 27, 2008 6:09:55 GMT 7
The Dream of Struggle? Love Demon, Angel Hate? (Do either of these sound good for a title?)
I A dream like vision A divine war Demon and Angel
II One step below love One step below hate Simply put -- Obsession
III The angel on wings of hate The demon on wings of love Divine Law Broken
IV Wake up Natural Law upheld Humans Love Humans Hate Angel-Demon Mix
OR Wakeup -- Natural Law upheld Humans Love and Hate Angel-Demon mix
OR Wake up Humans love, humans hate Natural law - Angel demon mix?
V The divine war is the eternal struggle The struggle to better ourselves To better our world
VI On the inside we're all Angelic Devils All love and Hate Creatures of Obsession and apathy
I am looking where your thoughts go while your reading it. I also would like to know which one you guys like for the 4th stanza. Also which title appeals to you as the audience?
Thanks!
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