Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 6, 2007 14:46:12 GMT 7
I figured I had to practice, since I have to be really really really really proficient in the latest design-related programs for my future. So if it wouldn't trouble you guys much, please criticize it in all aspects (proportions, clothes, the way it was drawn, shadings, etc) the stuff you'll find here. Thank you~ FIRST EVER DRAWING DIGITALLY RENDERED! =D
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Lacer
Entrance Examinee
... So troublesome.
Posts: 24
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Post by Lacer on Oct 6, 2007 14:49:09 GMT 7
She's hot. She's cute. She's pretty.
Ain't got much to say 'cept her right boot.
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Miyami
Entrance Examinee
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Post by Miyami on Oct 6, 2007 14:52:44 GMT 7
So cute!
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Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 6, 2007 14:59:00 GMT 7
She's hot. She's cute. She's pretty. Ain't got much to say 'cept her right boot. Fixed it~ Thanks.
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Lacer
Entrance Examinee
... So troublesome.
Posts: 24
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Post by Lacer on Oct 6, 2007 15:00:28 GMT 7
That was fast. O.o
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Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 6, 2007 15:05:09 GMT 7
xD I just erased some parts and added the white lines in. So it's pretty much a quick-edit.
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Post by MiMi on Oct 6, 2007 15:16:15 GMT 7
o__o.Make the end of each hair more darker about 3-4 more %.Unless the sun is really infront of her =_=;.When the hair is infront of the shirt make some "shadows".And oh BTW,the shirt makes her look fat.=_=; .Add up some more "lightnings" in the shirt.oh wait you don't need to do that.And the skirt.there's no lightnings.That was a crappy comment.. Nice boots/shoes. xD You color digitally better than I do.xDD
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Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 6, 2007 15:34:25 GMT 7
o__o.Make the end of each hair more darker about 3-4 more %.Unless the sun is really infront of her =_=;.When the hair is infront of the shirt make some "shadows".And oh BTW,the shirt makes her look fat.=_=; .Add up some more "lightnings" in the shirt.oh wait you don't need to do that.And the skirt.there's no lightnings.That was a crappy comment.. Nice boots/shoes. xD You color digitally better than I do.xDDDONE! =D Actually, my original idea was that she's gonna be in a baggy shirt and a baggy jacket and a fitted skirt, then boots. It looked okay in the original sketch, but when colored, it wasn't anymore xD So that became my problem, so I erased the baggy clothes idea. She looked slim now, but the print on the shirt looked out of place @_@ And I'm too lazy to fix it now. As for the skirt, I couldn't put on anymore lighting since it's black. x] And that was a very helpful comment, mind you. Thanks, Sonja ^_^
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Post by MiMi on Oct 6, 2007 15:54:20 GMT 7
o__o.Make the end of each hair more darker about 3-4 more %.Unless the sun is really infront of her =_=;.When the hair is infront of the shirt make some "shadows".And oh BTW,the shirt makes her look fat.=_=; .Add up some more "lightnings" in the shirt.oh wait you don't need to do that.And the skirt.there's no lightnings.That was a crappy comment.. Nice boots/shoes. xD You color digitally better than I do.xDDDONE! =D Actually, my original idea was that she's gonna be in a baggy shirt and a baggy jacket and a fitted skirt, then boots. It looked okay in the original sketch, but when colored, it wasn't anymore xD So that became my problem, so I erased the baggy clothes idea. She looked slim now, but the print on the shirt looked out of place @_@ And I'm too lazy to fix it now. As for the skirt, I couldn't put on anymore lighting since it's black. x] And that was a very helpful comment, mind you. Thanks, Sonja ^_^ It was?!xDD No problem.
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Saya
Entrance Examinee
? the reincarnation ?
The only thing I need: a reason to live
Posts: 17
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Post by Saya on Oct 6, 2007 19:57:59 GMT 7
Jan, this drawing pwns. Seriously. If I had CG coloring skills like yours, I'd die happy. xDD
I dunno if you still wanted the fitted skirt, but I don't think it looks.. uhh, 'fit.' Other than that... etou... well, nothing.
*hails Jan*
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Post by ||D e c a y . . . on Oct 7, 2007 0:24:28 GMT 7
Head.
That's all I can see with my tired eyes right now.
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Post by Althea V. on Oct 7, 2007 7:36:25 GMT 7
Yuki: xD yeah. The skirt. But I'll leave it as it is. It didn't look good when I editted it @_@;;
Rei: What about the head? =D
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Sara
Zero Star
=Bad GirL=
Learn the rules...then break them.
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Post by Sara on Oct 7, 2007 15:42:39 GMT 7
Saigo wa kisu de Time to Say Goodbye. *advertising Kokia* She's great =D And yeah, the song suits their break-up well.
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Hiei
Two Star
-[Humanity's Exile]-
It's time for you to meet my inner demons.
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Post by Hiei on Oct 7, 2007 15:48:21 GMT 7
This is a good theme song too. It was my 'inspiration' for the thread. Heh. AND THAT IS AWESOME!
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Post by ||D e c a y . . . on Oct 7, 2007 15:50:46 GMT 7
The head: DEKAI SUGIRU YO
And the fingers: Chisai sugiru.. but d/w I have troubles with them too.
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Sara
Zero Star
=Bad GirL=
Learn the rules...then break them.
Posts: 88
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Post by Sara on Oct 7, 2007 15:51:10 GMT 7
Yeah. We had to listen to inspirational songs before we are able to break up. xD
And thank you =)
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Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 13, 2007 21:29:47 GMT 7
Devil Boy Jack fanart from the book The Haunting of Alaizabel Cray. Finally, I'm done with it *had started it one month ago*. -_- Welllll...I thought I learned my lesson on not using Eggshell paper on major artworks from the Hiei and Hime fanart, but noooo. So yeah, the paper sucks. And I pressed too hard and made holes on it too. Good thing Santi-sensei taught me how to patch the back~ =D Mixed media: Acryllic Paint, Water color, WC pencils, Colored pencils and lotsa other stuff. Critic please~ >_<
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Post by Tomoyo on Oct 13, 2007 21:39:47 GMT 7
Nice Job!!!
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Post by Synthetic Darkness on Oct 14, 2007 4:17:27 GMT 7
Great job like always
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Post by Sa.Cre.D. on Oct 14, 2007 6:05:56 GMT 7
The head. *have headaches* Im tired.
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