Ambrose Narigni

[Ambrose Narigni]

Name: Ambrose Narigni.

Age: 13

Nationality: America.

Hair: Black, long, shoulder length.

eye color: Deep Blue.

Height/Weight: 5'' 4' and weight is 98 pounds.

Appearance: i Have a scar down my cheek from a fight last year with another person with an alice [will go into further in background], hair never covers eyes and is always off to the side, isnt very muscular. I have a sharp face, points me out to look like a "tough kid". I am extreamly tan from the fire.

Alice: fire creation(backside: While using extream fire i tire out extreamly easy)Only the fire i make obeys me. I still cant get it to like form to wepons and i cant make fire wepons from them or anything, I still Can't make Huge amounts either. I weight so little because the more fire i use the more energy it takes up, the fire keeps me alive but it absorbs alot of the calories from my food and the fat from my body.

Clothing: I Always wears dark cloths, I have a head band that is like cloth and is always on, has cloth up and down arms, always worn.

Personality:i am a loner from a dark background, I Don't often interact in my surroundings, If people to to me i usually ignore them.

Background: at the age of 1 i was abandoned by my real parents and put on someones doorstep, My foster parents Jill and rodger always tried there hardest to raise me. At three my foster parents figured i was a pyro maniac, they sent me to all types of phsycyatrist s and i hated them for that, At age 7 i had set fire to three of their house all on accident, My foster parents thought i was a freak, so they sent me away to bording school.
When i was 8 in the bording school, i had made no friends, i was often beat up and had a temper worth a fire demon. (And thats what was causing the fire) Then at age 10 I lost my temper and somehow had my arms Covered in total fire, and it didnt burn me even weirder the fire obeyed me, I Had burned my school enemy to death and was expelled. My foster parents took me back in for a week, and then sent me out untill i was old enough to come to alice academy, and at age 12 they sent me here. Im thirteen now, i had a whole year of living in your woods, away from all others, where i practiced with my alice, I now wonder if any of the student ever seen fire or a glow, maybe a burn mark on the ground or tree, or even me, I watched a lot of matters at the school and loved it and couldn't wait to join.

Family History:
Real father: unknown
Real mother: unknown
Foster mother: Jill Narigni -Alive
Foster father: Rodger Narigni -Alive

[Jayo Saringi]

Hey, nice sheet, i also like the alice

[mattheas]

hmmm ok, first of all the age should be around 12 or 13, this is an elementary school.
Next is the height, 5'11" is much too tall for a 13 year old, did you mean 5'1" ?.

Now for the alice, you should elaborate a bit more on it, like the strenghts and weaknesses, because you shouldn't already have full control of it, that comes with practice and experience, and the charcter's still very young. This is also to level the playing field, so all the students here have yet to fully master their alices.

If you can get into more detail about your background, that'd be great, and just adjust it to a 13 year old instead of a 14 year old.
And just another thing, the spell check function is very valuable, it should be used all the time, before posting your replies. It is so much more fun to read a correctly written post isn't it?

Well that's it, once you've done it you should PM the admin, that's Shiara Arai about geting your application approved

Thanks, hope you'll join us soon

[shiara]

A few things:

[/li][li] Age: As Mattheas said, you should be between 12 and 13.

[/li][li] Height: I know of some pretty tall 7th graders. My sister is 5'9" for one, so just a little shorter is okay. Now weight: unless you're seriously anorexic, you need to weigh at least 115 lbs.

[/li][li] Appearance: You need to go into a little bit more detail. YOu can write about face shape, eye shape and spacing, body proportions [legs to torso, arms to torso], skin tone, etc.

[/li][li] Alice: You have the choice of either fire creation or fire manipulation, but not both. [Considering your history, I'd go with fire creation] Fire Creation simply means that the only flames you can control are the ones you generate yourself, and that the control is harder to come by.

[/li][li] Background: Just a note: neither fire creation nor fire manipulation actually turn you into fire; that would be something else.

[EDIT]:
-: APPROVED :-
[class: 1B and dangerous]

-Aelys