Re-application Shibuya Megumi

[megumi]

Name:
Shibuya Megumi
Age:
12
Alias:
Megu
Custom Title:

Nationality:
Japanese
Hair Color:
Brown
Eye Color:
Blue
Height:
1.4m
Weight:
27kg
Appearance:
Shibuya Megumi
Age:
10
Alias:
Megu
Custom Title:

Nationality:
Japanese
Hair Color:
Brown
Eye Color:
Blue
Height:
1.2m
Weight:
16kg
Appearance:


Alice:
Shape-Shifting
Ability to shape-shift into anything or anyone she wants. The Alice lasts for a very short period of time but she can manipulate the being to a certain extent during that period of time.
It ends if the main body feels a strong emotion or senses something bad.It is weak against people with pheromone alices.

Personality:
Although always seeming cold and indifferent , she is actually very competitive , funny and somewhat childish. She isn't very trusting but altruistic in her own way. She seems aloof but is actually very protective and cares about her nakama and such. She is very introverted and anti-social.

Background:
Born into a rich family in Tokyo. Megumi's life has been all about grades,school,appearance,inheritance.But was thrown out of the family when she was 5 because of her bad grades and her disobedience , a shame to the family. She was shunned by all her classmates in the former public school she attended and was labeled as 'weird'. Wandered to the gates of the Alice Academy where she was accepted as they thought she had a strong alice. Actually very smart , but appears stupid.

Family History:
Unknown

Extras:

Approval Status (Mod 1): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 2): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 3): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Admin): Not yet Approved
Class Section: Not yet Approved
Combination Class Section: Not yet Approved
Dangerousness: Not yet Approved

[Xena]

FIRST AND FOREMOST!
Read carefully. ^^;;

You repeated the categories Age, Alias, Custom Title, Height, Weight, Hair Color, Eye Color, and Appearance. So please erase the excess categories, since there are two Heights and two Weights, and you cannot have two of those since you only have one body. Please erase which of these are wrong.

Height:

We only accept height in inches. Please modify.

Weight:

We only accept weight in pounds [lbs]. Please modify.

SECOND Age [10 years old]:

Erase this part. 10 years of age is not allowed.

Appearance:

Talk about her body. Does she have curves? scars? moles? What's her skin complexion?

Alice:

I understand shape-shifting as how it's said. I have five characters with that talent. Now, what are you talking about here? Present the answers for the following in this category, please.

• How long can she stay in one form?
  
• How does she shape-shift? Does her whole body change? Or a darkness engulfs her, then after she transforms?
  
• What do you mean by "manipulate the being in a certain extent during that specific period of time?"
  
• Specify two more weaknesses. The weakness you provided doesn't seem like a weakness at all. Weaknesses like, staying in the form for more than one hour traps her in that form forever and her alice will leave her, stuff like that.
  

It ends if the main body feels a strong emotion or senses something bad.

I don't get where this sentence comes in.

Background:

Just state the following:

• How did she discover her Alice?
  
• How did she know what an Alice was?
  
• What was the reaction to her parents and/or friends to this discovery?
  
• How did she know about Alice Academy?
  
• What age did she enter in?
  

That last one means, "I want to know if you entered in 10 years old or 12 years old, because if you entered in 10 then you have to change it to 12."

Good luck and have fun~

[megumi]

i did? lol sry my mistake. abt the age too.

~lol abt the alice , i was thinking of sprit hopping whne i wrote everything

~I'll get all the things up tml