Akira Suou (not yet done)

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iwase said:

I've just scanned it, but picked up quite a few things wrong.

Clothing, Alice and Personality needs elaboration

shugin3734 said:

who the hell are you? i dont even know you!

Either give advice or don't post at all. It's annoying and it's only filtering the thread. Two words: Mendou and Kusai. Which means hindrance.

[MiMi]

Please don't spam in the character sheet's or your post will be deleted immediately.
Anyway,

Alice:

Alice:Her alice is Speed she can run about 800 miles an hour and her weakness is darkness because she cant see with out light (duh)

Darkness??Hmm..I think you should change that.Coz that's not even a weakness.And 800 miles??That's pretty far if you ask me.

@clothing:

Is that all she wear?C'mon give us some more details on what she wears!

@background:Did you even get the permission of Shugin??To what I have seen in what she said I think..not.So you must EDIT THIS.