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[joshua33216]

Name:ovan

Age: 15

Alias:twilighite brigade

Custom Title: {.dragon.}

Nationality: filippino

Hair Color: blue

Eye Color: blue

Height: 5'1 ft

Weight: 103 ibs.

Appearance: i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee195/oldcprt/h-103_50070_ovan.jpg.jpg (click here)

Alice: summoning mythical characters,weapons,aida arm,and he can call any thing he want.he just choos by thinking that object and it will go directly infront of him.

Personality: bad but in battle hes though.he fights people as he want and fight as he can.he likes to fight and dont want to kill but he needs to.

Background: his memory is bad he have come to places and places to train himself until he finds his alice he fight for his friends and hides his left arm.

Family History: he is an bad guy who likes to fight his lvl is 95 and hisleft arm is hidden (aida arm).he likes fighting but difficult to defeat.his friend is haseo and shinon.to supportt his friend hell have to pk shinon.family un known he grew upo by fighting and summoning.

Extras: byonet,flame sword,utsumi musahi,dragon knight summon.

Approval Status (Mod 1): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 2): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 3): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Admin): Not yet Approved
Class Section: Not yet Approved
Combination Class Section: Not yet Approved
Dangerousness: Not yet Approved

[Tomoyo]

I think you are only...nine? By the way, explain more of your sheet. Appearance: Only Tan? Explain

Alice: Explain....MORE

Background: Your history...not your picture's background...

Personality: I think I am gonna die. Well, personality, your Attitude. Cheerful face?

Family History: YOUR FAMILY'S info! NOT GAME'S LEVEL! think you played too much games..

[†~Lamia~†]

x-x ok ok, let me try and do this.

Alice is not a Game world. o-o There isn't really a leveling system besides the stars system for Alice. Maybe you NEED to watch The show.
But From what i see you need a lot of help. Yes i know .hack//Roots is a good show but.

Age:12 -13 maybe a little bit older, unless staff says its okay on the age, which i doubt..

Height: This should be in Feet and inches.

Weight: This should be in pounds, and nothing more really.

Appearance: looks too old for a student of Alice more like the age of a teacher.

Alice: Needs too be much more in Depth, What does it do, How does it work, maybe even Why it works.

Background: This isn't a single event that happened in you past, It is a series of events that happens too you Till you are finally accepted into Alice.

Family history: as it was stated before, There aren't levels on Alice besides the star system

Okay after having too explain all this It shows really that you must have not read any part of the rules or do not understand them.
So i would ask for help with this, Trust me the first time is never easy but i can help you too the best i can

No i will not write a story line for you/ anyone. I need what little writing power that i have too pass English.

[MiMi]

. . . . . . I don't know what to say..All the wrong spelling..all the wrong grammar...ALL THAT'S WRITTEN HERE IS WRONG..Except the appearance,hair color,custom title,alias and eye color...

CHANGE THE AGE.YOU'RE NOT A TEACHER TO BE IN THE AGE "26".YOUR AGE SHOULD BE IN 12-13 ONLY.@_@

NAME:THAT'S YOUR ONE AND ONLY NAME?OVAN?YOU DON'T HAVE A LAST NAME?EDIT IT.

HEIGHT:WHAT KIND OF HEIGHT IS THAT.CHANGE IT.YOU KNOW HEIGHT ??

EX."5'4" "5'5"

WEIGHT:YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME..CHANGE IT.YOU KNOW??WEIGHT??

EX.120 LBS.130 LBS.

ALICE:

-WHAT DOES IT DO?
-WHAT IS/ARE ITS WEAKNESSES?
-HOW DOES IT WORK?

BACKGROUND
-HOW WAS HIS CHILDHOOD?GOOD,BAD,FRIGHTENING?
-HOW DID HE DISCOVER HIS ALICE?
-WHAT HAPPENED?
-HOW DID YOUR PARENTS KNOW ABOUT ALICE ACADEMY?

FAMILY HISTORY
-WHO WERE YOUR PARENTS?YOUR SISTER{S}/BROTHER{S}?

DO THIS FORMAT

NAME-AGE-ALICE
NAME-AGE-ALICE
NAME-AGE-ALICE

Sorry for the big letters.I wasn't looking when I was typing my comments.

[glow=red,2,300]-::Miyaki:/glow]

[Azura Keith]

Man, joshua, elaborate your sheet, especially the personality, background and alice. And also tell how you got your alice and how did you found out about alice academy. And the age should be reasonable for a seventh grader, like 13 or 12 years old. Man, you won't be approved that way. Again, ELABORATE. That would be enough