Kimika Marie Yamamoto

[kimika]

Name: Kimika Marie Yamamoto

Age: 13 years old

Alias: Mika

Custom title: Kamika

Nationality: American and Japanese (but born in Japan)

Hair Color: Brown

Eye Color: Dark brown

Height: 5'9

Weight: 100lbs.

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Background: Her parents met in Japan when her Mom and Dad were officemates. Then when they got married they decided to live in America. When Kikima was still a baby they were always fighting but in the end they become happy with each other. Then when Kikima grew up they having a hard time on picking a school because all of the schools that Kikima had studied she was not comfortable with the School. So every year Kikima always tranfer to a School. Then her Parents decided that she will study in Japan while they are both working in America and they will always send money to her ever week/month, and sometimes they will send a letter to her. She was expecting that Alice Academy will be a great school and she was expecting friends, friends that who would care for her.

Alice: She can give energy to others by using her two eyes. She gets energy when she gets enough sleep about 4 hours or more. When someone is weak she can energy so that the person will be okay. When she sleeps more hours themore energy she can give to others. She can also put energy to electronic gadgets. Her weakneses are her fears and when she does not get enough sleep. When her fears are shows she might faint and cannot go to school for a few days. Or when she does not get enough sleep she cannot go to school she can but she'll be late. Well sometimes it could affect in her mood. You cannot expect something about her mood their is something really strange about her.Her power came from her family in her father side


Personality:She is very kind, talented, shows who she really is, and she's just a simple girl. When she was studying in America all the students their are afraid of her, they don't know her power but their kind of not caring for her like a friend. So sometimes her mood is happy, sad, excited. But when it comes to her power sometimes she's in bad mood.
Family History:
Mother: Rose Adams
Age: 37 years old
Occupation: Business Woman

Father:
Name: Takahiro Yamamoto
Age:38 years old
Occupation: Business Man
Alice: He can give energy also but more powerful than Kikima.

* Before her parents tried to separate from each other. But when Kikima came they tried to move on, love each other, and be good parents to their child Kikima. Her mother accepted that her husband has powers. But her mother's parents don't know about it.
Their family picture when Kikima was still little.
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Kikima with her mom
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Kikima crying when she was still little
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Changed pictures to links, added bold. --Kenzo
Approval Status (Mod 1): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 2): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 3): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Admin): Not yet Approved
Class Section: Not yet Approved
Combination Class Section: Not yet Approved
Dangerousness: Not yet Approved

[x A m r i t a . . .]

Gahhh, turn your pictures into links or resize them, one or the other or I'll delete them >_<;; It's stretching the page.

Put a line beak between your Alice and background or I'll mistook it and say "Add your alice in". You have to make your character sheets understandable, because we can't think the way you want us to think if you don't put in every little bit of details.

Background:

they were always fighting but in the end they become happy with each other.

Who fought with who?

because all of the schools that Kikima had studied she was not comfortable with the School.

Err.. what? Rephrase please.

Then her Parents decided that she will study in Japan

What? I thought they are in Japan.

Anyway, your whole background is WRONG. Because, going to Alice academy means you have already discovered your alice, you're shocked, you talk with your parents about it, they're shocked, sent you to AA. Or something along those lines.

Alice: ELABORATE. I want to see the title, what they can do, what the drawbacks are. All of those things.

Line breaks: A.K.A "Enter key". I want to see them too. Because it confuses me like shizz < (Yeah, you know what I was about to say) here.

[Viktor Georgi]

Hello and welcome to Alice Academy!

Weight:

Weight: 100lbs.

I think it’s too light for your height, but you don’t have to change it. It’s your choice.

Appearance:

You just placed bunch of humongous pictures. Try shrinking them or just put the effing link. You could also place a description, or something.

Background:

Background: Her parents met in Japan when her Mom and Dad were officemates. Then when they got married they decided to live in America. When Kikima was still a baby they were always fighting but in the end they become happy with each other. Then when Kikima grew up they having a hard time on picking a school because all of the schools that Kikima had studied she was not comfortable with the School. So every year Kikima always tranfer to a School. Then her Parents decided that she will study in Japan while they are both working in America and they will always send money to her ever week/month, and sometimes they will send a letter to her. She was expecting that Alice Academy will be a great school and she was expecting friends, friends that who would care for her.

Ok that was confusing and weird.
Elaborate more… and use proper grammar…
- In this part you should narrate your life since the time you could remember up to now. Like, what was your childhood like? Was it fun and enjoyable or was it filled with sadness and misery? Did you have friends or were you a loner? How about your parents? Did they like you or were they disgusted with you? About your alice, when did you found out about it? What was your reaction? What about your parent? Your friends? Lastly, How did you learn about the academy and was it your choice to come here or where you forced to?

Alice:

Alice: She can give energy to others by using her two eyes. She gets energy when she gets enough sleep about 4 hours or more. When someone is weak she can energy so that the person will be okay. When she sleeps more hours the more energy she can give to others. She can also put energy to electronic gadgets. Her weaknesses are her fears and when she does not get enough sleep. When her fears are shows she might faint and cannot go to school for a few days. Or when she does not get enough sleep she cannot go to school she can but she'll be late. Well sometimes it could affect in her mood. You cannot expect something about her mood there is something really strange about her. Her power came from her family in her father side

Ok, this part is very essential in your sheet so you should make this part simple yet detailed enough. An alice is your power in this board and you should really think what alice you would really like. Once you’ve chosen an alice you should explain it and how it works.
--- Some questions to help you:
------ How does it work? How does it affect people and things alike? What are its weaknesses and strengths? How does your alice affect you? How does it work? What are its side effects?

When someone is weak she can energy so that the person will be okay.

She can what?

Her weaknesses are her fears and when she does not get enough sleep.

What are her fears?

When her fears are shows she might faint and cannot go to school for a few days. Or when she does not get enough sleep she cannot go to school she can but she'll be late.

I didn’t get this part...I mean I got it, but rephrase it or something…


When you’re done with the editing and all that shiznet, pm any mod, admin, or whoever wants to help…
You don’t have to place that much pictures, one or two will do..

Good luck!

[Arose]

Arose to the rescue with deleting useless posts!

Just hit me up with a PM if you need help resizing the pictures or if you need help with grammar or approval and I'll take care of it.

[Miyami]

Hey arose its not useless post she could fix it you know so if my post is
useless you would delete it too i didn't expect that from you
well what ever!

kimika you should delete some of your pictures because not all of them are important

Don't mind her. --Kenzo

[MiMi]

shugin3734 said:

Hey arose its not useless post she could fix it you know so if my post is
useless you would delete it too i didn't expect that from you
well what ever!

kimika you should delete some of your pictures because not all of them are important

ALL of them are important that's because she WEARS THEM.

And yeah,just like what the other mods said,"Please resize your pictures" because its stretching the page..

[||D e c a y . . .]

miyaki said:

ALL of them are important that's because she WEARS THEM.

No. I'm not impressed with the clothing section. I rather see her writing paragraphs and paragraphs, no matter how long it is (unless it's below 10 sentences), rather than sticking a whole bunch of pictures just to show us what type of clothes she wears. Why? Because it just meets the standards.

[MiMi]

iwase said:

miyaki said:

ALL of them are important that's because she WEARS THEM.

No. I'm not impressed with the clothing section. I rather see her writing paragraphs and paragraphs, no matter how long it is (unless it's below 10 sentences), rather than sticking a whole bunch of pictures just to show us what type of clothes she wears. Why? Because it just meets the standards.

Oh yeah..I remember..You want clothing descriptions in a sentence form or a "more" specific way..Anyway,

@background:
Tell us how you found your alice..Tell us what happened.

[`.aya.mitsuki.]

Dear I think you really need to fix this in many ways.

And other staff stop scaring her. Try to be helpful in a rather nicer way. Especially Arose >->
This is not a useless post and you are not going to delete this as long as she can still fix this. And Others could try to be helpful right?

so let's start with the helping.

The Appearance and Clothing:
- You should go easy on the pictures dear. Maybe a maximum of 4-3 pictures only and the rest can be explained. It will be much easier for other staff.

The Personality:
- A little bit more fixing and neating up and adding more detail should be very nice.

The Alice:
- You know adding more useful info can be very helpful. And try to give a specific name to your alice if possible.

The Background:
- add the following informations:

= Starting from birth if possible.
= The childhood
= The discovery of alice
= And the copping stage of your story [after discovery of alice]
= And when you got to the academy

Make sure is reasonable dear.



So now you have Ideas on what to do please fix it. You can Ask for help anytime you may need it.

[Arose]

ayashi said:

It will be much easier for other staff.

Staff aren't supposed to go and find shortcuts or find the easy way out. Staff are supposed to go and do their job no matter how hard it is.