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Post by gothgirl on Oct 7, 2006 6:48:59 GMT 7
Name: Milkilia Shujki Age:12 Alice: Fire, can't really take all control of it sometimes when she gets mad she burns out of her hands. I really think she has a anger problem. personality: shy but cool ask her a question she'll probably be able to answear it. She works out to be a nice person all the time. Looks:[cant put up picture need help] black hair. blue eyes usualy black and red shirts and skirts. History: mom-dead dad-dead ;D
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Hime
Two Star
Water Princess
Maybe summer was already over...a long time ago.
Posts: 501
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Post by Hime on Oct 7, 2006 9:46:45 GMT 7
I have to comment on this. If you're still working on it, please put up the following:
Alice: More details Height and Weight Appearance: Adescription of her appearance. For the image, click the picture button in the Add Tags field while posting. Background: How her life has been when she haven't discovered ehr alice yet, How she discovered her alice and how she got in the academy. Family Background: At least put the name.
PM me or Althea so I can check it after you're done.
For inspirations, look at the other bios in the approved section, ne? ^_^
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Post by -l-_caramel.cherries_-l- on Oct 9, 2006 14:54:43 GMT 7
Well, I do agree to what Hime said. This sheet needs alot of work. I'll help you out as well!^^
Background- Add things like what happened in your past, and how your parents and friends treated you when they found out about your alice, how you found out the academy and your alice.
Personality- how your character acts, and how you react to people around you (your character i mean).
Clothing- what do you wear on your spare time? not just your uniform.
Alice- elaborate more on this bit. You need to have a weakness, coz being too powerful is LAME!(sorry!!^^')
Appearance- Yes elaborate on this one as well!
Family History- Place a format like this:
Mother- (name) - (age)- (dead/alive) Father- (name) - (age)- (dead/alive) Sister or brother -(name) - (age)- (dead/alive)
Weight and Height- Place something on this category.
There you go. Oh yeah, make your background really long!
-:Cher:-
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Sonachi
One Star
*Sadness*
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Posts: 422
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Post by Sonachi on Oct 9, 2006 15:02:47 GMT 7
weird..her Karma is 16 or somethin'?And also i think i have met this person in this board before ,her character name was (i forgot..)i think its on page2,i don't know...,and also i'm not sure FOund it! Name: Sarah, Nioxion Alais: Sally Age: 12 Nationality:British Hair color: Black with red stipes Eye color:Brown with green around the Iris Height: 4'9 Wheight: 98 lbs. Apperince: Short for her age she is very neat to look at because she has a special look in her eye. But when she doesn't have a shine in her eye she's probably thinking about something.When she does she is very very ,very happy!When she has a frown she's sad probably about grades she is very picky like her mother about grades.If she's acting nice it means shes friendly today. Alice:Invisibility.She can stay in it for an hour, she doesn't know what else she can like do with her power but turn invisible. She Is See through but her shadow can be saw sometimes if she lets it.People can hear me if they try hard enough,but it is hard not to be loud and have fun for me! Clothing: She wears large baggy clothes and always cleans them out because she is very alergenic to dust and mositos. Backround: Mom and my brother came here for school and it was my turn. But when I was five I had really long hair and tripped on it all the time, my parents called me clumzy but it was my power that got to them. Whenever I was mad I suddenly dissapered and they couldn't find me they were mad when I showed up.Then they told me they were going to send me to a special school, I thought omg what school are the sending me too? then they explained it all I would be sent to a school for powers.then I turned twelve and that was that. family histroy: father: dead mother:dead brother unknown to her here!proof!!
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Ran Kotobuki
Zero Star
Super Gal[/u][/color]
your facing the super gal of shibuya ^__^
Posts: 120
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Post by Ran Kotobuki on Oct 9, 2006 20:59:37 GMT 7
I can help with the pic!!! Get the URL of the image and use this [/img] try it out on your sheet. and personality down to family history you could put more ^^ hope I helped ... ^^
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Hiei
Two Star
-[Humanity's Exile]-
It's time for you to meet my inner demons.
Posts: 603
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Post by Hiei on Oct 11, 2006 17:16:31 GMT 7
weird..her Karma is 16 or somethin'? Hey karma is as such cause I changed it. Before I did, it was -17. I changed it to 17. Why? Just because she posted a lousy bio, everyone smited her karma. I was pissed. You know why? Cause most of those people posted suck-up bios too. And Milkilia, try looking into other people's bios, preferably the mods' and learn how to create a satisfactory bio.
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