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Post by mikanhuuga on Sept 10, 2006 13:59:01 GMT 7
Name: Mikan Huuga Age: 12 Nationality: Filipino , Chinese Hair Color: brown Eye Color: brown Height: 5:4 Weight 117 Alice: wind Clothing: alice academy uniform Personality: nice , gentle alice My alice is wind i can manipulate stong and weak wind like breeze or i can also make a big tornado. The wind alice can also control a littlebit of water alice like rain. name Most of you is maybe wondering why my name is mikan huuga ... obviously you will easily know that i am a mikan&atsume fan so i like made up a thing that mikan is already a "huuga". nationality My real nationality is Filipino chinese. age My age is not based on the age of mikan .. (duh!  ) this is my real age ! hair and eye color This color isnot really my hair and eye color i based it on mikan .. ;D hight and weight My hight and weight ... i'm heavy  personality I'm an idiot who always helps people no matter what even if i am in danger. I won't let anyone die or get hurt because of me. If i knew you risked you life for me or you got hurt because of me i will cry 
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Akira
Zero Star
+My.Heart's.A.Battleground+[M:0]
Let me be
Posts: 180
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Post by Akira on Sept 10, 2006 14:19:32 GMT 7
I would recommend you to put more in each category and oh yeah...you should put your background and your char's family background...also be specific in measurements like your weight and height..what you wear when you're not in school uniform..
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»kaяiii★™→
One Star
White Light
Te wo Tsunaide...
Posts: 299
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Post by »kaяiii★™→ on Sept 10, 2006 14:25:26 GMT 7
well your bio is very confusing .....
anyway welcome ....
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Ellie Sinclair
One Star
Troublemaker[/color]
Loved by some, hated by many, envied by most yet wanted by plenty.
Posts: 354
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Post by Ellie Sinclair on Sept 10, 2006 14:31:31 GMT 7
Yup, I do agree with Tamaki and why do you have 2 personalities, nationality..etc.?? It might confuse others.
Anyway, just put in your sheet who your character truly is and not who you are in real life. ok!!^^
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Tsuki Sakamoto
Two Star
氷の尼僧[M:0]
i am the darkness that fills the night...as you sleep
Posts: 639
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Post by Tsuki Sakamoto on Sept 10, 2006 15:46:56 GMT 7
Well, I wanna comment...A LOT!hehe hope you dont mind...
And you shouldnt be saying stuff bout your self, this is supposed to be your character's sheet...not yours.
Background- add this category into your sheet, write things about your past.
-What happened in your childhood?
-How did you find out about your alice?
-Do your parents know about it?
-How did you know that there was such thing as Alice Academy?
Personality- you cant just say that youre nice and gentle, how bout telling us how you react to people around you. For short make it longer <---weird thing to say...
Clothing- of course you wear the school uniform...but is that what you always wear? how about your spare time, what do you wear during your hours of fun? Street Clothes to be exact.
Alice- Suggestion for this...how bout calling your alice "Wind Manipulaton"; and elaborate more on your alice. How does it work?
Family History- In case you dont know; this is important in your sheet...well check all the approved sheets and see for your self how you place the details.
Haha!that was alot!
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Yuri-chan
Zero Star
?sImpLe cLoVer?
o-o;; uhh...
Posts: 189
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Post by Yuri-chan on Sept 10, 2006 16:06:21 GMT 7
Well the ones who posted here are right .....
I suggest you take a quick look on the sheets of others .... there you can have some clue to what your suppose to do .....
and welcome to the alice acadeny ......
[EDIT]
But in it never said that Mikan and Natsume got married ... well did they ....
And they didn't even confessed to her do how did Mikan became a Hyuuga ....
Anyway Knowing Tsuki already said the problems the only thing I can say don't put yourself in your character's sheet. Well I hope I didn't sound to mean or moddy ....
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Tsuki Sakamoto
Two Star
氷の尼僧[M:0]
i am the darkness that fills the night...as you sleep
Posts: 639
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Post by Tsuki Sakamoto on Sept 10, 2006 16:09:26 GMT 7
Well, this suggestion is unimportant...Natsume's surname isn't Huuga but its Hyuuga..haha! ;Dtold you its unimportant!
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Ellie Sinclair
One Star
Troublemaker[/color]
Loved by some, hated by many, envied by most yet wanted by plenty.
Posts: 354
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Post by Ellie Sinclair on Sept 10, 2006 16:30:54 GMT 7
That is unimportant...^^ but yep..Natsume's surname is Hyuuga.
Anyway, I think she already knows what we're trying to tell her. So, let's just leave this sheet to the moderators and administrators...n_n
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Miaka
Zero Star
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Post by Miaka on Sept 10, 2006 17:44:01 GMT 7
I agree with Tsuki... You missed A LOT. It might seem much mroe better if you add in a picture too. =)
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Touya Mizuki
Entrance Examinee
-::Executioner::-
~Im kind towards girls, but guys...i dont know~
Posts: 49
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Post by Touya Mizuki on Sept 10, 2006 17:55:04 GMT 7
Sorry to break this to you Miss Mikan, but i agree to Tsuki. She pointed out everything you missed!Unbelievable!!but, just listen to everyone's comments and you'll know what to do next. PM Miss K after finishing the rest of your sheet. And Miss K will do the rest
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Post by Miss K. on Sept 11, 2006 0:58:36 GMT 7
I have such good students! Thank you guys. Any way... My students are right. I would like you to fix it as soon as you can. Look at others profiles to get ideas and also sometimes they show what you did wrong when you compare yours to theirs. I would really like to thank Tsuki ... She seems to be doing my job better then me XD, Any way just fix up your sheet and pm me.
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Asakura
Two Star
.coming apocalypse[/size]
Die
Posts: 610
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Post by Asakura on Sept 14, 2006 16:01:31 GMT 7
You're here to learn. So you can't make tornadoes.
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Jacques
Entrance Examinee
+Walking Incognito+
Ridiculous little freaks
Posts: 12
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Post by Jacques on Sept 14, 2006 17:05:03 GMT 7
Well, I wanna comment...A LOT!hehe hope you dont mind... And you shouldnt be saying stuff bout your self, this is supposed to be your character's sheet...not yours. Background- add this category into your sheet, write things about your past. -What happened in your childhood? -How did you find out about your alice? -Do your parents know about it? -How did you know that there was such thing as Alice Academy? Personality- you cant just say that youre nice and gentle, how bout telling us how you react to people around you. For short make it longer <---weird thing to say... Clothing- of course you wear the school uniform...but is that what you always wear? how about your spare time, what do you wear during your hours of fun? Street Clothes to be exact. Alice- Suggestion for this...how bout calling your alice "Wind Manipulaton"; and elaborate more on your alice. How does it work? Family History- In case you dont know; this is important in your sheet...well check all the approved sheets and see for your self how you place the details. Haha!that was alot! I agree with her. That's supposed to be your character's sheet...not yours. |
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Post by mikanhuuga on Sept 16, 2006 12:33:09 GMT 7
well...guys thnx for the comment now i can improve but i can just finish this meybe tomorrow or in the other days because i have to memorize something in my chinese and ... i have to do so much homeworks which is due next week so i promise to renew this sheet !  tnx ;D |
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) this is my real age ! 
tnx ;D