Domingo
Zero Star
Silent Fire[/i]
Posts: 134
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Post by Domingo on Jul 18, 2006 1:28:32 GMT 7
it need to be longer in all places, if you need help comming up with stuuf just ask people here dont mind helping ^^
try loking at some of the approved bio's to see how one should look and use as an example.
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Post by Vilhelm Abendroth on Jul 18, 2006 9:50:13 GMT 7
*huh...I thought one of the other staff members would have been here already. I'm the first one? SWEET! *ahem*
Domingo's right, some of the categories need to be a little more descriptive.
--Appearance-- This is what you character looks like. Facial and body features. Do you have pale skin? Or are you tanned? How would you describe your face? So on and so forth...
--Alice-- This should also include a brief description of how your power works and how long it lasts. Remember, though, that you've come to the academy to learn how to control your alice and therefore shouldn't be too advanced it using it.
--Clothing-- Saying that you wear baggy clothes is good, but maybe you should elaborate more on this. Is it jeans and t-shirts? Or shorts and sweatshirts? If you run out of ideas try saying what colors you normally wear.
--Personality-- This could use some work. Everyone can be described as sweet, nice and sometimes sour. So to develop this one, try to give examples of what causes your mood to change. How do you react to certain situations.
--Background-- This one is another major category. This should describe how your alice first appeared and everything else that's happened in your life before you came to the academy. Take Domingo's suggestion and see if you can get a few ideas from the students how have been Approved.
--Family History-- This usually includes a run-down of your immediate family. Most people just put names and relationships down...so take a crack at it and give that brother of yours a name!
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Asakura
Two Star
.coming apocalypse[/size]
Die
Posts: 610
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Post by Asakura on Jul 18, 2006 13:18:36 GMT 7
lol, good girl
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Post by Miss K. on Jul 18, 2006 13:39:46 GMT 7
Actualy vilheim I pmed her about it but it is clear she did not read it or listen to it. How ever I am not angry. XD
Now I agree with what Vil said. Fix those then Pm Lumina or Kurogane to approove it. well bye I hope when I return your profile is finished and will give me somethign good to read. ^^
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Ambrose Narigni
Entrance Examinee
Don't Make It Look So Pretty Burning.
Posts: 23
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Post by Ambrose Narigni on Jul 18, 2006 23:38:25 GMT 7
I'm her brother in real life, i knew she should have asked me about her bio, but no, the bone headed 9 year old little sister of mine wouldn't lol j/k but yeah
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Post by gothgirl on Jul 20, 2006 19:55:46 GMT 7
haha haha srry guys
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