Jason Psychosis [Finished!]

[Jason Psychosis]

Name: Jason Psychosis

Age: 13

Alias: Psycho

Custom Title: The Deranged Mind

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Nationality: African American

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: One is white, the other is black

Height: 6' 1"

Weight: 110 lbs

Appearance: Jason has a tanish brown complexion. He has low-cut hair and medium-sized eyes. He has a small, almost nonexistent chin, around nose, and thin eyebrows. His arms, legs, and chest are all muscular. He wears a white, long-sleeved button-up shirt, black jeans, white socks, and black dress shoes. One notable feature of him is that during his car accident he attained a scar that starts at his left eye and goes down to his chin.

Alice: Transformation

Jason has the ability to transform into just about anything he can imagine. He can even create creatures in his imagination and become them! He also attains their talent(e.g. a cheetah's speed, ect.) for a short period of time(usually two mintues). This doesn't work with Alices, though. He has to be very careful though, since the creatures he transform into still have their own thoughts and ideas.

The one, very dangerous setback is that the more he uses his Alice, the less controll he has over the animals he transforms into and the more dangerous he becomes. If he uses the same animal or person twice he'll black out, letting the animal's mind take over, and might awaken anywhere. This seems to reset every week.

Personality: Jason hates crowds. He is quiet, and mostly stays to himself. He is fairly intelligent. He always looks calm, even when he's panicing. He likes dark colors and sleep. His favort=ite subject is English. He hates anything bright, things that keep him awake, people who gossip, and Math teachers.

Due to losing his parents, Jason is mentally disturbed. At times he lets the animal's instincts take over him, making him very dangerous.

His family was fairly wealthy and Jason and his twin do online buisness to stay that way.

Background: Jason was always thought of as a miracle child. Right before he was born, a comet flew over the room his mother was in. People say that is the reason he was born with one eye shut,(the black one) and the other open. His twin brother, Jack, seemed to be unaffected by this inccedent, though.

Jason never liked people, especially in crowds, because they all looked at him and treated him strange. For a long time he hated his eyes and considered them a curse.

And were they?

When he was five, Jason's parents had a car accident and died before they could make it to the hospital. Later that day Jason was hit by a car, severely damaging his arms, legs, and one of his lungs. He recovered, but seemed....different. He didn't hate his eyes anymore, in fact he was proud of them.

Though proud of his appearance, Jason still had much hatred toward the outside world. The day before he turned fourteen, he blacked out and awoke covered in blood. After that he decided to leave from the world's eye and stay in a safe haven, a place that others with strange traits went to. A place called Alice Academy.

Family History: Mother: Rachel Psychosis - Dead - No Alice
Father: Jack Psychosis Sr. - Dead - Mind controll
Brother: Jack Psychosis Jr. - Alive - Gravitational Defiancy

Extras:

Approval Status (Mod 1): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 2): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 3): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Admin): Hayashi Setsuna
Class Section: 1-C
Combination Class Section: Corporealist
Dangerousness: Not yet Approved

[Xena]

Welcome to Alice Academy!
I'll be the one checking your sheet.

Age: 14

The only ages you could enter as are 12 and 13. Please change. [besides you could just set your character's birthday closer so that it'll be changed to 14 anyway xD]

Height: 6' 1"

Weight: 200 lbs

I'm not familiar with boys' height, so I don't know if yours is acceptable. Height IS acceptable.

I will, however, comment on the weight. It's a...tad bit too heavy. Lower it down a notch please. [edit: uh..my bad about the height. x___X;;' sorry.]

Appearance: Jason's left eye is all white, with no pupil to speak of. His right eye is all black. He wears a white T-shirt and black jeans.

I need more information on this one. Just answer the questions below and fit them into sentences, OR you could simply improvise and describe practically everything you could see when you look into a mirror, OR just get a full-body picture up. xD The 3rd's mucho easier.

[/li][li]What is his head's shape?
[/li][li]How would you describe his eyes? Big, round?
[/li][li]How about his eyebrows? Are they incredibly thick like Rock Lee's, or too thin for people to read his expressions?
[/li][li]How does his nose look like? Is it high-bridged or flat? Does he have large nostrils that flare everytime he breathes? What?
[/li][li]Are his lips thin or thick? Glossy maybe? Or obviously pale?
[/li][li]Is his neck proportional to his head, or is it a bit longer than it should be? Is his Adam's apple shown clearly or not yet visible?
[/li][li]How about his upper torso? Muscles on his arms? Any scars? Bodyhair? Does he have abs? If so, what pack? [xDD]
[/li][li]His lower torso. Are his legs scarred? Does it have muscles? Is it hairy? Is he flat-footed? Does he have any abnormalities with his toes?

Alice: Psychological Manipulation

Jason has the power to make anything see, do, think, believe, or even become whatever he wants it to.(e.g.: make a rock talk, make a person see a giant fish) He can even make himself do and become things! (e.g.: fly, disappear, etc.)

Give a limit on how long each could last. Note that if it goes beyond that there should be a side effect on him. Personally, I think you're alice is giving you too much power, but since I'm not too sure, you should ask someone else who knows better than me.

Personality: Jason hates crowds. He is quiet, and mostly stays to himself. He is fairly intelligent.

Elaborate a bit more. Is he moody? Calm and collected? What are his likes and dislikes? How does he react to people when he's angry? when he's sad? when he's cheery? ... Actually, since Jason seems like the loner type, at least state his likes and dislikes if you think it's too much for me to ask.

Background:

At fourteen, Jason realized that his power, referred to as an Alice, was dangerous and that he could lose control of it at any time. He'd heard about a place where others with Alices lived. He decided that he would stay there and learn how to control his power. His Alice.

Yeah, you should change 'At fourteen' to just 'A week(/day/month) before turning fourteen' so that it's like 14 already that he went here, so that while staying here he'll turn 14 already.

Family History:
Mother: Dead
Father: Dead

xD That seems so straightforward. You should put in the names of his parents too, and if they had alices or not. If you want, you could put in their ages now, or the age they died.

Sorry about the age issue, you need to follow that rule. Unless of course you have permission from the admins.
Enjoy your stay and have fun modifying![/size]

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Alice: Time and Space Manipulation

Jason has the ability to bend the rules of time and space and make others see, do, think, believe, or even become whatever he wants it to.(e.g.: make a rock talk, make a person see a giant fish) He can even make himself do and become things! (e.g.: fly, disappear, etc.)

His most powerful manipulations are flight, transformation(makes you think you're something else), healing, and shifting the gravitational pull on objects. His Alice doesn't have many limits, since it operates off of Jason's imagination.

Healing is the special talent of his Alice. If he gets hurt he just uses his Alice to manipulate the wound(s) and make them heal.

The drawback to this is that it takes a lot of energy to perform his Alice. He sleeps a lot in his spare time to recover from the energy drain.

... Uhh, we don't allow Time Manipulation, mostly due to GOD MOD. We only allowed one guy to have it, because he's been here for: ages. Yep, ages.

If it's supposedly called 'Time and Space Manipulation' does that include levitating, healing and defying gravity? I don't think that's the right 'title' to give to your alice. Also, since 'Alices' are a concentrated power. And please, limit yourself to one alice. It says there everywhere. Well, not really everywhere, but you know what I mean.

Healing is healing, flight is flight, and so on, et cetera. =]

[Jason Psychosis]

And I'm done!

[Xena]

Alice: Transformation

Jason has the ability to transform into just about anything he can imagine.

Can he be a rock? Can he copy other people's appearances?

He also attains their talent(e.g. a cheetah's speed, ect.) for a short period of time.

How short? Ten minutes, maybe five?

And does he have a time limit for a transformation? Like in Animorphs, where each only gets 2 hours, and if one goes beyond the limit, he's going to be trapped in that form forever? It helps if you have that one though. :3

Right-o, that's all to fix before I approve you.

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Nuuu. Although it's much better to read I suppose, I shall congratulate you for that.

ANYWAY! There are still teh flaws. Yes, teh hated flaws.

Jason has the ability to transform into just about anything he can imagine.

He also attains their talent(e.g. a cheetah's speed, ect.) for a short period of time.

No can do on that one, sorry.
Say this particular thug met one of my characters (Kuro - Long black hair, hot, sexy has the ability to shoot whatever from a gun or a cylindrical item) and then he gets to know him. Then he transform into Kuro, suddenly having his ability... wouldn't that be kind of.. err.. I don't know the right word for it, but you know what I mean right?

I guess what I can accept is the whole.. Animal + Ability or Human + Ability. But not those with alices, because that's just... weird.

During his stay at the hospital, Jason learned he had the ability to transform into any animal he could think of. He decided that after he got better he'd begin to learn how to use this new-found power.

From six to ten, Jason taught himself how to use his ability with animals. From elevn to twelve he started transforming into people. At thirteen he found that he could transform into more than just animals and humans, he could transform into anything he could imagine!

As time passed, Jason felt himself losing controll of his power more and more. The day before his fouteenth birthday, he blacked out and awoke covered in blood. It was then Jason realized that his power, referred to as an Alice, was extremely dangerous and that he could lose control of it at any time. He'd heard about a place where others with Alices lived. He decided that he would stay there and learn how to control his power. His Alice.

What I see wrong with this.. is that he doesn't learn his abilities in the Alice Academy. You don't learn it by yourself. It's something the school teaches you to do. Heck if you don't then why would you seclude yourself from the normal beings and enter this maniac school?!

You only find out about your alices. That is why you go and are enrolled at the academy.

[Jason Psychosis]

iwase said:

I guess what I can accept is the whole.. Animal + Ability or Human + Ability. But not those with alices, because that's just... weird.

He can't attain Alices. He can attain animal traits, but that's it. I'll add that into the application.

What I see wrong with this.. is that he doesn't learn his abilities in the Alice Academy. You don't learn it by yourself. It's something the school teaches you to do. Heck if you don't then why would you seclude yourself from the normal beings and enter this maniac school?!

All right. I'll think of something else for his background.


But at least it's not as bad as before, right? That's good.

And Xena:

Can he be a rock? Can he copy other people's appearances?

Jason can become a rock, but it would be a waste of time and energy. And yes he can copy people's appearances, voices, even their thoughts, making him a very formidable foe.

Like in Animorphs, where each only gets 2 hours, and if one goes beyond the limit, he's going to be trapped in that form forever? It helps if you have that one though. :3

The Animorphs had to touch animals before attaining their forms. Jason just has to think about becoming something for him to do it. They also had the ability to heal themselves, but he doesn't. I'm not basing his Alice on Animorphs. He can do so much more than just become animals!

[Xena]

"Like in Animorphs, where each only gets 2 hours, and if one goes beyond the limit, he's going to be trapped in that form forever? It helps if you have that one though. :3"

The Animorphs had to touch animals before attaining their forms. Jason just has to think about becoming something for him to do it. They also had the ability to heal themselves, but he doesn't. I'm not basing his Alice on Animorphs. He can do so much more than just become animals!

No, I mean a time limit. Didn't say you were basing his alice on Animorphs.

[Jason Psychosis]

Actually I said I wasn't basing it on Animorphs.

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Apr 3, 2008 4:21:11 GMT 7 Jason Psychosis said:

Though proud of his appearance, Jason still had much hatred toward the outside world. The day before he turned fourteen, he blacked out and awoke covered in blood. After that he decided to leave from the world's eye and stay in a safe haven, a place that others with strange traits went to. A place called Alice Academy.

I think you should change that. Other than that, I approve of this bio. I wanna commend you for being the first (I think) African American character in AA.

† Setsuna