cooro

[corro]

name: cooro
age: 12
alias: feather boy
Hair: Black
eyes: Black
Weight: 7st
Height: 5ft
Appearance is as above

[`.aya.mitsuki.]

Uhmm.. for one thing your picture doesn't work dear..
And if ever you didn't see the sheet format uhh well here it is:
[b]Name[/b]:

[b]Age[/b]:

[b]Alias[/b]:

[b]Custom Title[/b]:

[b]Nationality[/b]:

[b]Hair Color[/b]:

[b]Eye Color[/b]:

[b]Height[/b]:

[b]Weight[/b]:

[b]Appearance[/b]:

[b]Alice[/b]:

[b]Personality[/b]:

[b]Background[/b]:

[b]Family History[/b]:

[b]Extras[/b]:

[b]Approval Status (Mod 1)[/b]: Not yet approved
[b]Approval Status (Mod 2)[/b]: Not yet approved
[b]Approval Status (Mod 3)[/b]: Not yet approved
[b]Approval Status (Admin)[/b]: Not yet Approved
[b]Class Section[/b]: Not yet Approved
[b]Combination Class Section[/b]: Not yet Approved
[b]Dangerousness[/b]: Not yet Approved

There =D
Do your best now ^ ^
(I wont place any comments for now okay?)

[corro]

Name:corro

Age: 12

Alias: Black Angel, Black wings of death, Messenger of Death (he doesn’t want these he just gets called them.)

Custom Title:

Nationality: japanesse

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: black

Height: 5ft

Weight: 8st

Appearance: 11 year old boy, blackish brown eyes and black hair, often wear an aviator hat.

Alice: fc02.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/190/4/3/cooro_by_flip_Jap.jpg
A crow- Alice, Cooro can spring black feathered wings from his back and use them to fly like a bird. Feathers apper on his arm.

Personality: He is naïve, a bit absent-minded and slow to make decisions. However, he is optimistic and always cheerful. He loves eating, much to the chagrin of his friends, but is kind-hearted, and more than willing to help anyone in need, although sometimes his good work results in him asking for pay, if he needs it. He doesn't have sensitive feelings (that much) like when he is told to go away he will without a second thought, wanting to be helpful.

Background: His past was a mystery, but it seems that he had his Alice since he was born. Cooro rescued Husky, his step sister from the circus when he arrived, but was first employed as the "messenger of death" (due to his black wings). He enthusiastically let other children like him join up and travel with them right away. He trusts everyone, which can get him in trouble, but can lead to good things.

Family History: His family were said to leave him at a church because they knew that the Alice academy were going to take him away and they didn’t want to make any bonds.

Extras:

Approval Status (Mod 1): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 2): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Mod 3): Not yet approved
Approval Status (Admin): Not yet Approved
Class Section: Not yet Approved
Combination Class Section: Not yet Approved
Dangerousness: Not yet Approved

Mimi--Turned the picture into a link.

[Xena]

Name:

Present a last name, please. And capitalize the beginning letter of 'corro'.

Weight:

We only accept pounds [lbs].

Appearance:

Elaborate on his body. Does he have scars/moles? Muscles?

Alice:

Put in drawbacks. How many times can he use this in a day? What happens if he goes beyond that limit?

Personality:

What happens when he's sad? When he's angry? How does he react to people when he's depressed? when he's furious?

Background:

I want his history here, everything. How his childhood was like, how he discovered his alice, when did he discover his alice, what was his reaction to his ability when he found out about it, what was the reaction of friends/family when they found out about his alice, how did he know about alices and lastly, how did he find out about Alice Academy.

Family History:

I want names. Mother, father, siblings. Also their age, and if they have alices or not. If they do, what alice?

I'll resize your picture since it's stretching the page. Oh wait, Mimi did the honors of changing it to a link. Saankyuu. =3

G'luck.

[MiMi]

The picture/drawing is stretching up the page.@___@

--I changed the picture/drawing into a link.

[EDIT]
Xena:I changed it into a link =__=''

[`.aya.mitsuki.]

Xena pointed most of it =O xD

Appearance: 11 year old boy, blackish brown eyes and black hair, often wear an aviator hat.

- okaaaaayy... Confussing me.. I thought your character's age is 12? Maybe your refering him to look like an 11 year old? But I see no difference in what a 11 year old look to a 12 year old. Change that..

Family History: His family were said to leave him at a church because they knew that the Alice academy were going to take him away and they didn’t want to make any bonds.

- Ha!! o-o I think that info is better on the background part of the character sheet.. you put there the name and status of ur family members. If you want you can explain each one of them =3

and Mimi did a good job on the link but you could also try this:
[url=http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/190/4/3/cooro_by_flip_Jap.jpg]picture[/url]

that is all =-= -bows-