Untitled (Open for constuctive Critisizm)

[Damion Kasai]

The Dream of Struggle?
Love Demon, Angel Hate? (Do either of these sound good for a title?)

I
A dream like vision
A divine war
Demon and Angel

II
One step below love
One step below hate
Simply put -- Obsession

III
The angel on wings of hate
The demon on wings of love
Divine Law Broken

IV
Wake up
Natural Law upheld
Humans Love
Humans Hate
Angel-Demon Mix

OR
Wakeup -- Natural Law upheld
Humans Love and Hate
Angel-Demon mix

OR
Wake up
Humans love, humans hate
Natural law - Angel demon mix?

V
The divine war is the eternal struggle
The struggle to better ourselves
To better our world

VI
On the inside we're all Angelic Devils
All love and Hate
Creatures of Obsession and apathy

I am looking where your thoughts go while your reading it. I also would like to know which one you guys like for the 4th stanza. Also which title appeals to you as the audience?

Thanks!