Poem...

[Yuriko]

I Could Still Remember...

I could still remember your face in my dreams
I want you back as crazy as that seems
I want you to see me as I fall
And stand in my own without any call

I could still remember the first time we met
Your friendship was something I wanted to get
I could still remember when you smile at me
Your smile was the brightest that I could see

I could still remember the times we share
To each other we're always fair
Giving one another a chance to see
All of the things we wanted to be

I could still remember the day you said goodbye
It was really painful and made me cry
I never saw you again in my sight
My life was all out of light

A year after we saw each other
You don't care and wouldn't bother
I could not remember my old friend anymore
I was hurt and felt I would sink into the Earth's core

I waved goodbye as you ignored me
That's not what I want you to be
I've forgotten what I had once remembered
And couldn’t see how I want it to be

When we're older we could finally see
I miss you and the feeling of being free
Five years from now we'll look back on it all
That love will stand the test of time and never fall

Comments, critics, suggestions, etc wanted... but don't shoot me for posting this. >< -_-;;

[Alaine Feliana Kumamoto]

*claps vigorously* Another wonderful masterpiece!!! ;D Keep it up, Silver!! Uhh...I mean Yuriko...hehehe

[kazuyuki]

Lol ^^ xD

mwahaha... yay! my first comment! lol thankies

[Sir Matsujun]

NICE even thought i didnt read it

[Yue Akihiro]

-_-;; thanks anyway... ><;;

[Two cute Souls]

redmoon said:

-_-;; thanks anyway... ><;;

no problem!

[chowqing]

hello yuriko nice poem.. :)chowqing

[Yuriko]

thank you chowqing! ^^ xD

your name reminds me of food