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Post by Sa.Cre.D. on Aug 13, 2007 17:01:19 GMT 7
Meet somebody I don't know.....
Do you think it's the right time? Or should I o it some other time? Finding somebody that I can treat as a friend I can search forever and never end....
I tried to befriend with them And I felt something wrong in the rhythm I discovered that they are just a fair-weathered friend They would go away, easy to surrend....
Ugly memories I don't like to reckon I like to dream a friend who would shouts, "Let's get it on!" A far off memory is like a scattered dream It's not that tasty as a chocolate cream....
Meet somebody I don't know Can he or she be my worst foe? It's very important like a sealed treasure You, them, even I cannot take the pressure....
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Post by ||D e c a y . . . on Aug 13, 2007 17:06:10 GMT 7
First of all, do you know how hard it is to read black on a semi-black background?
Second of all:
Typo?
Last of all:
Tooi no omoi chigireta yume. Is it just me or is that really from Kingdom Hearts? You do know that they have stamped COPYRIGHT on everything, right? And I personally CARE, because I want to work for Square someday.
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Xena
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Post by Xena on Aug 14, 2007 8:07:38 GMT 7
Tooi no omoi chigireta yume. Huh? Translate, please. Regarding the poem, why did you use periods? Don't you know the maximum periods is three, because anything more than that is considered 'wrong'? Cause seriously, I'm a freak and all =P And what's the connection of KH2? =/
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