Yuri-chan
Zero Star
?sImpLe cLoVer?
o-o;; uhh...
Posts: 189
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Post by Yuri-chan on Aug 2, 2007 22:43:14 GMT 7
He is the Light that shines,
A gem from the mines
He leads me out of the darkness,
And showering me we gladness
Regardless of what the future may hold,
I will learn to be bold
You are always there to be my knight,
And at the end of the day you are my light
Just seeing you makes me smile,
Just thinking of you makes me feel fine
Remembering you makes me wonder,
But I will never forget the words i uttered ps:
May be short but it means alot.
Read it and undersand it to know what I mean... |
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Mi'ki-chan
One Star
[ .Nyappy. ][/color]
Once known as Takara Yuu.
Posts: 202
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Post by Mi'ki-chan on Aug 2, 2007 22:46:51 GMT 7
It's really good ><
My poetry sucks in comparison.
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Yuri-chan
Zero Star
?sImpLe cLoVer?
o-o;; uhh...
Posts: 189
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Post by Yuri-chan on Aug 2, 2007 22:52:07 GMT 7
when i wrote it I Felt i was possed.... o-o;;
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Sara
Zero Star
=Bad GirL=
Learn the rules...then break them.
Posts: 88
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Post by Sara on Aug 3, 2007 10:17:02 GMT 7
The words used are simple, but it's not at all bad. You made a pretty good rythymn with them too, and the title caught my attention.
It's as if the whole poem was spoken from MisaMisa's point-of-view xD
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Post by -l-_caramel.cherries_-l- on Aug 3, 2007 13:38:43 GMT 7
YEHEE~~ xD omg i wont stop teasing you Yuri xD ~~~ its for some one...very special to Yuri's heart  ahihihihihih ^^ *nudges you* yeehee~~ ^^ |
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Post by x A m r i t a . . . on Aug 3, 2007 18:17:35 GMT 7
--Cough, Yuri made a mistake, there's supposed to be an 's' in front of the 'he'. And yeah, I know the special person in Yuri's heart. It's none other than the great me! >]
I'm 30% joking.
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Kisara
Zero Star
%7C%7C...Dreaming of you// [M:0]
"This is the scenery at the border between dreams and waking reality."
Posts: 167
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Post by Kisara on Aug 3, 2007 19:42:40 GMT 7
So beautiful
-sniff-sniff-
Excellent job!
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Post by Arose on Aug 14, 2007 9:00:33 GMT 7
You should show it to little Haru-Chan~
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ahihihihihih ^^
