Shin
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To those whom I' ve killed.... I' am nobody
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Post by Shin on Jul 3, 2007 20:57:09 GMT 7
FROM THY SOFT LIPS
Unfold your self I say to thee Troubled by these harrows that lingers in my vain The heavens might not beteem for me to love you Coldly I see it as the dearest of all punishments to me.
I see it senseless of a punishment so dearest, so fell as death itself Could break a heart of a fool such as I in two As harbingers shouts out your name, I post toward you Just to gaze upon your Untainted beauty.
“Soft!” my mind shouted, but not even the most cunning of warriors Could not tame such a beautiful creature. I’ am now Impotent, my corse could not move For my mind speaks of your grace still.
Or ere I turned around, going back to where I was My ears have lied to me for I heard you calling “ don’t lose thy words ” she said. Like Niobe, tears started to cleanse my eyes.
I walked away and had left flushing in my galled eyes. But even though fell words I have heard My heart still beats the tune of your beauty still. Hard upon, this temple carve to fade.
Withal, list the footsteps of my door. It opens Does my eyes cautel thee, I see thy beauty beside me As the Image is about to fade, “Nay ! Leave me not ” “ To late I say to thee worry not for I carve to stay “
Thus I retire, Thus I say farewell I died with a kiss from thy soft lips. The memory in my heart, a tune of your beauty And a love that even Death could not take.
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darkangel
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[glow=red,2,300]Dark Angel[/glow]
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Post by darkangel on Jul 3, 2007 21:15:31 GMT 7
*applause*
wow! it's good! ^^ xD xP
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Xena
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The world is all and I am one. All is one and one is all.
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Post by Xena on Jul 4, 2007 16:13:10 GMT 7
It is good. In fact, it's great. Nice.
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Shin
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Post by Shin on Jul 4, 2007 21:22:23 GMT 7
Another round for those poetry lovers ^_^ hope you like it SWEET TRUTH OF LIES Thou must have heard thousands of sweet words. But “halt!” I say to thee, for a man’s sweet tongue, Causes no more than pain and suffering to whoever. For a man takes you into an impotent state. A man’s word quaintly plays a fetch of wit. All of this are but only games for him, Gaming on your heart. So that he can be victorious, In giving Likes to others such as he. Take heed in every step you make, for your life Hangs on his palm. Like in a game of chess, you are But a pawn on the board. Who am I to say this? You ask I’ am but also a man, a fool who has been beaten by the game itself. “Frailty, Thy name is woman“ I say to thee For a man who loves his woman gives up his Cautel, just to say lies of truth. A man such as that Must be given an addition.[/center]
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Xena
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The world is all and I am one. All is one and one is all.
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Post by Xena on Jul 5, 2007 7:39:18 GMT 7
What's a cautel?
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Shin
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Post by Shin on Jul 18, 2007 15:00:36 GMT 7
The meaning of Cautel is LIes or deceit
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