Poetry - 30 April '07

[Watcher]

Independence

You can't bring me down,
I'm stronger then ever.
You can't make me frown,
I'm gonna smile forever.

I'll be strong and move on,
Facing reality with a smile,
Let go of me and soon,
I'll be ahead of you by a mile.

I don't need you to survive,
I stronger than you think.
I don't need you to be alive,
I won't let myself sink.

I'm stronger than the one you used to know,
And you will no longer be the one that I will follow.



Reality

This isn't your life,
This isn't your fantasy.
It is just a knife,
And it is called reality.

You're not going to survive,
With that personality.
You'll soon lose your life,
To the pain of reality.

You are not who you think,
All you can do is flee.
You do not have the strength,
To face your reality.

A man's strength is judged on how he faces reality.
You are just a weakling living on your own fantasy.



Love That's So Hard to Find


Both eyes meeting with yours,
Hyptonising and mesmerising,
Those clear innocent eyes of yours,
Captivating and motivating.

A smile met with a smile,
But with no words exchanged.
And everytime we collide,
Joy would fill my veins.

So here I am once more,
Waiting for you to come back.
I'll keep my eyes on that door,
Hoping for a bit of luck.

I will be yours, if you will be mine.
This is love that's so hard to find.

[Vanilla]

I like the second and third poem, but the best would be the third.
Independence needs some modifications, like 'I stronger than you think' to 'I'm stronger than you think.'

[Shugo Yuy™]

Awwww little Darky's a poet xDDD Those'd make pretty good songs if you just made one of the stanza's a chorus >>

[Hiei]

vanilla said:

I like the second and third poem, but the best would be the third.
Independence needs some modifications, like 'I stronger than you think' to 'I'm stronger than you think.'

... Typo. >.<

Thanks for the comment! ^_^