Post by Hiei on Mar 17, 2006 15:58:11 GMT 7
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As promised, here is the first chapter. Well, have fun reading! And I apologise if I potrayed your character wrongly!
[Chapter 1]
Arrival Of Danger
A school of misfits. A school of freaks. That's was what some people called the school Alice Academy. Maybe they were right, maybe not. After all, not everyone in the school wanted to use thier powers for themselves. They were being trained to use their powers properly and for the good of mankind. Of course, an exception would come everynow and then.
One of them, would be an individual named Alex Ryans, nicknamed Danger, because of his Alice. An alice of darkness and death. One that has been said to have killed about fifty people in less than ten minutes.
He had been escorted to AA on a jeep full of military personnal. He was a dangerous kid, after all. Alex looked out the window, at the sunset at the edge of the vast sea of sand. He sighed silently.
The van drove through the academy gates, and plenty of whispers filled the courtyard as it drove through. Almost all the people in the courtyard were looking at the van. Those who weren't, were those who didn't give a d**n about the world. A few such examples were Isaac and Hiei, who were talking to each other at a nearby tree.
The van stopped in front of the school entrance, where three teachers stood to greet the new comer. One, was Hidaka Akiko, the teahcer of class 1A, the class where Danger was posted to. The other, was Joseph Nohman, the teacher of the Dangerous class, where Danger too was gonna be posted at. Last, but not least, the principal of the school, Magdalene Rosenfield.
Danger was brought out of the van, escorted by two heavily armed soldiers. One of them talked to Magdalene Rosenfield, while the other untied Alex of his bounds. The moment he did, Mr Nohman put his hand on Alex's head and nullified his powers. Alex felt as if a part of him had been stripped off. That's how it always felt.
Alex had brown spiky hair, with handomse features on his face. He wore a purple jacket over a black shirt. His purple pants was quite baggy, but not what you would call jogging pants. He had black Nike shoes. Two girls nearby giggled as they saw him, and Alex merely looked back at them. The soldier poked his back with the tip of his rifle.
Alex walked up the staircase, beside the soldier who was talking to Magdalene Rosenfield. "He will be in your care now. Good luck." Madalene gave a nod of thanks, then looked at Alex. "Come on, now. Let me give you a tour around the school."
As Magdalene rought him around the school, Alex looked around, his Alice talking in his mind. There were plenty types of Alice. One was the 'active' one, where the alice was comepletely in control of the Alice-user. The other one, was a 'live' one, where the Alice had a mind of its own too, merging with teh Alice-user.
Come on, Alex. You know what to do. Let us wreck havoc and chaos in this palce. Alex replied with a 'no'. He had enough of causing pain and suffering. Alex. You and I have been together for ten years now, and now, after all this time, you're not listening to me anymore? Tell me, how many times have I saved your ass?! Alex kept silent. It was too many to count.
See what I mean? I am you, Alex, and you will listen yo me, as much as I listened to you. Alex remembered his troubled life, and his Alice being the only person he could turn to. His Alice always helped him. He helped punish those who bullied him.
Then, Magadalente met up with another teacher. The two started talking for a while, before Magdalene turned to Alex. "Sorry, Alex, but I have to go now. I hope you can go around yourself?" Alex looked up at her, then nodded. Magdalene smiled, then followed the teacher back to the staff room.
Alex looked around, then sat down on the nearby bench. Before we can do anything, though, you have to find a way to unnull me. Alex ignored him. He knew that Mr Nohman wouldn't just do that because he asked him to. He stood up, then met someone. Hiei.
Alex walked up to him. "Hey, my name's Alex. Nice to meet you!" Alex smiled at him, just as the cheerful boy he actually was. Hiei looked up at him. His short, black figure like a dwarf to Alex's tall figure. Though, he merely grunted, then walked past him. Hiei wasn't in the mood to chat then.
Alex turned to face him as he left. "Hey! I'm talking to you!" Hiei ignored him, merely walking out of the school and into the courtyard once more. Alex growled. Despite his kind and cheerful attitude, he was short-tempered too. See what I mean? Your first day, and everyone hates you, disrespect you.
"Your right. They should respect me. They should fear me." Good. That's what I wanted to hear. If you want them to respect you, you have to make them fear you. Still, we need to unnull me before we can do anything.
In his mind, Alex already managed ot hatch a plan to get Mr Nohman to unnull his Alice. Soon, very soon, the school would know the meaning of fear.
d**n WRITER"S BLOCK! I apologise if it sucked...Not in the mood...Plus, I have a time limit now. I have to go to my friend's birthday party, and I'm already late. One more thing. Sign ups are still open, so just sign up until this series end.
As promised, here is the first chapter. Well, have fun reading! And I apologise if I potrayed your character wrongly!
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[Chapter 1]
Arrival Of Danger
A school of misfits. A school of freaks. That's was what some people called the school Alice Academy. Maybe they were right, maybe not. After all, not everyone in the school wanted to use thier powers for themselves. They were being trained to use their powers properly and for the good of mankind. Of course, an exception would come everynow and then.
One of them, would be an individual named Alex Ryans, nicknamed Danger, because of his Alice. An alice of darkness and death. One that has been said to have killed about fifty people in less than ten minutes.
He had been escorted to AA on a jeep full of military personnal. He was a dangerous kid, after all. Alex looked out the window, at the sunset at the edge of the vast sea of sand. He sighed silently.
The van drove through the academy gates, and plenty of whispers filled the courtyard as it drove through. Almost all the people in the courtyard were looking at the van. Those who weren't, were those who didn't give a d**n about the world. A few such examples were Isaac and Hiei, who were talking to each other at a nearby tree.
The van stopped in front of the school entrance, where three teachers stood to greet the new comer. One, was Hidaka Akiko, the teahcer of class 1A, the class where Danger was posted to. The other, was Joseph Nohman, the teacher of the Dangerous class, where Danger too was gonna be posted at. Last, but not least, the principal of the school, Magdalene Rosenfield.
Danger was brought out of the van, escorted by two heavily armed soldiers. One of them talked to Magdalene Rosenfield, while the other untied Alex of his bounds. The moment he did, Mr Nohman put his hand on Alex's head and nullified his powers. Alex felt as if a part of him had been stripped off. That's how it always felt.
Alex had brown spiky hair, with handomse features on his face. He wore a purple jacket over a black shirt. His purple pants was quite baggy, but not what you would call jogging pants. He had black Nike shoes. Two girls nearby giggled as they saw him, and Alex merely looked back at them. The soldier poked his back with the tip of his rifle.
Alex walked up the staircase, beside the soldier who was talking to Magdalene Rosenfield. "He will be in your care now. Good luck." Madalene gave a nod of thanks, then looked at Alex. "Come on, now. Let me give you a tour around the school."
As Magdalene rought him around the school, Alex looked around, his Alice talking in his mind. There were plenty types of Alice. One was the 'active' one, where the alice was comepletely in control of the Alice-user. The other one, was a 'live' one, where the Alice had a mind of its own too, merging with teh Alice-user.
Come on, Alex. You know what to do. Let us wreck havoc and chaos in this palce. Alex replied with a 'no'. He had enough of causing pain and suffering. Alex. You and I have been together for ten years now, and now, after all this time, you're not listening to me anymore? Tell me, how many times have I saved your ass?! Alex kept silent. It was too many to count.
See what I mean? I am you, Alex, and you will listen yo me, as much as I listened to you. Alex remembered his troubled life, and his Alice being the only person he could turn to. His Alice always helped him. He helped punish those who bullied him.
Then, Magadalente met up with another teacher. The two started talking for a while, before Magdalene turned to Alex. "Sorry, Alex, but I have to go now. I hope you can go around yourself?" Alex looked up at her, then nodded. Magdalene smiled, then followed the teacher back to the staff room.
Alex looked around, then sat down on the nearby bench. Before we can do anything, though, you have to find a way to unnull me. Alex ignored him. He knew that Mr Nohman wouldn't just do that because he asked him to. He stood up, then met someone. Hiei.
Alex walked up to him. "Hey, my name's Alex. Nice to meet you!" Alex smiled at him, just as the cheerful boy he actually was. Hiei looked up at him. His short, black figure like a dwarf to Alex's tall figure. Though, he merely grunted, then walked past him. Hiei wasn't in the mood to chat then.
Alex turned to face him as he left. "Hey! I'm talking to you!" Hiei ignored him, merely walking out of the school and into the courtyard once more. Alex growled. Despite his kind and cheerful attitude, he was short-tempered too. See what I mean? Your first day, and everyone hates you, disrespect you.
"Your right. They should respect me. They should fear me." Good. That's what I wanted to hear. If you want them to respect you, you have to make them fear you. Still, we need to unnull me before we can do anything.
In his mind, Alex already managed ot hatch a plan to get Mr Nohman to unnull his Alice. Soon, very soon, the school would know the meaning of fear.
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d**n WRITER"S BLOCK! I apologise if it sucked...Not in the mood...Plus, I have a time limit now. I have to go to my friend's birthday party, and I'm already late. One more thing. Sign ups are still open, so just sign up until this series end.
can't wait for the next part of Forsaken Angels as well as this one! 
